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Access
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Access

Some of the best narratives come from an unfiltered look behind the curtain.

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Incongruent
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Incongruent

To see or read something that appears out of place grabs attention. The mind strives to reconcile, “what the hell?”

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Failure
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Failure

No failure, no drama. Virtually all movies and novels depict something going awry.

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Conversational
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Conversational

Talk and write like a real human being. You can do it!

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Atomized Content
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Atomized Content

Packaging bite-­size chunks of a story often resonate with journalists.

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Outward
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Outward

The opposite of “Me, me, me … and here’s a little more on me.”

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Sausage Making
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Sausage Making

Sometimes, a backstory on how something happens is more interesting than the core narrative.

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Quantification
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Quantification

Everyone likes to keep score. Numbers can bring shape to the intangible.

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Opinion
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Opinion

Nothing bores like the middle of the road, often viewed by execs as a safe harbor. Have a take.

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Words
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Words

Words matter. A single word amidst a vanilla page can jar the senses.

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Context
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Contrast
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Contrast

Comparisons – like the difference between “what was” and “what is” – can help the audience ascertain significance.

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Visual
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Visual

Even if a picture isn’t worth 1,000 words, visuals accentuate storytelling.

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Humanity
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Humanity

Faces dominate the covers of business magazines for a reason. Cultivate human touch points in your storytelling.

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anecdote
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Anecdote

Underutilized in business communications, the anecdote brings realness and entertainment value to the story.

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Levity
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Levity

Considered the killer app in business storytelling, the mere cracking of a smile is a win.

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Drama
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Drama

Business storytelling with an entertainment dimension stands out. Enter drama, stage left.

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Protagonist
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Protagonist

Transform an executive into a hero, and you’ve got the makings of a happy ending (and a brand-­building moment).

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Barrier
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Barrier

Here’s one surefire way to cultivate drama: Communicate a barrier and tease out the journey of overcoming that barrier.

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Voice
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Voice

A distinctive voice can elevate a business story, whether that comes from the company or an individual.

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The “NASCAR Story” Always Attracts Attention

The “NASCAR Story” Always Attracts Attention

No, I’m not talking about Matt Kenseth winning the Daytona 500.

Instead, consider what brings the vast majority of folks to the racetrack.

It’s the possibility to witness a high-speed wreck.

I’ve come to call the type of story that offers up the possibility of a wreck – defining “wreck” as an element of the story tied to the protagonist going horribly astray – as a “NASCAR story.”

I recently saw a front-page note in the San Jose Mercury News asking readers if they’re out of work, searching for a new job and interested in Warholic fame to drop the editors a note. The Merc will pick a few folks to follow on their job hunt and report on each saga.

This is a NASCAR story because the potential exists for a wreck. Given that almost 600,000 folks lost their jobs in January alone according to the U.S. Labor Department, there’s no guarantee that these stories will close with the birds chirping and everyone living happily ever after.

I suppose it’s a similar dynamic to reality TV and what keeps people coming back to “American Idol” (as an aside, my daughter has Lil Rounds as the early favorite). The unscripted nature of this type of story means the reader/viewer doesn’t know the ending, with the potential wreck always lurking around the corner.

I’m surprised more communications professionals don’t develop and pitch NASCAR stories. No question, there’s a dimension of risk, but the reward can be opening doors at heavyweight publications without the typical news announcement.

I flagged a story last month in The Wall Street Journal titled “Cooking Up Ways to Improve Steaks on a Plane” (provided the link to the story on MSN for those without a subscription to the online Journal). It’s an entertaining read as columnist Scott McCartney essentially places himself at the hip of the Singapore Airlines’ head of food service, Mr. Freidanck, as he evaluates one of the airline’s food vendors, the Chelsea Food Service based in Houston.

It’s also a NASCAR story.

McCartney’s unscripted “access” makes for drama and a narrative rich in anecdotes:

Because the dry air of a jet cabin dries mouths, taste is diminished in flight. So Singapore and other carriers exaggerate flavors in meals.

The piece also contains a few mini-wrecks in which the caterer’s executive chef gets raked over the coals (couldn’t resist):

Mr. Freidanck tastes while Shashi Nath, Chelsea’s executive chef, awaits judgment. A corn chowder isn’t thick enough. Oops, celeriac and pear cream soup is too thick. “Do they really understand celeriac here in Texas?” Mr. Freidanck asks the throng taking notes on every order.

 

A sauce is too starchy; beef soup is too salty. “Something was lost in translation on the beef soup,” he says. Crabmeat on top of avocados in one salad looks messy and he redesigns the layout himself, then photographs it when he gets it exactly as he wants it. Mushrooms in one dish are chopped too small, their variety unrecognizable. Muscovy duck is undercooked and doesn’t taste right. “It’s not Muscovy!” Mr. Freidanck says.

“It is positively,” Mr. Nath insists.

I can almost picture a shouting match: “It’s not a Muscovy duck … Yes it is … No it isn’t … Yes it is.”

Yet, even with the negatives, the reader takes away an overall positive impression of Singapore Airlines and its quest to serve the customer.

Kudos to the Singapore Airlines PR team (assuming the seed of the story came from them) for not only manufacturing the storyline but for selling the concept to management.

The media loves NASCAR stories.

It would behoove communications professionals to push beyond their comfort zone and that of their company to develop these types of angles with unhandled access. Such an approach certainly better aligns with the needs of the media than a news release.

Journalists Accept Apple’s “Storytelling Candy”

Apple’s CEO Tim Cook trekked to China in late March to show the world that Apple cares.

After the damning New York Times report, “In China, Human Costs Are Built Into An iPad,” Apple wanted to specifically connect with what goes on behind the curtain in the making of its products.

I noticed that photos of Cook adorned in laboratory-like regalia appeared in many of the stories, but didn’t think much about it.

Then I saw Ma Jun from the Institute of Public and Environmental affairs in Beijing interviewed about Apple on Bloomberg West last week. The segment included the same photo used in many of the print and online stories

 

 

This prompted me to reverse-engineer how Apple handled the communications around Cook’s trip to China.

In short, Apple’s strategy reflected the cliché “a picture is worth a thousand words.”

The company hired a photographer to take photos of Cook interacting with Foxconn line workers and then distributed two shots to the media. Even if the words in the print/online stories were negative – and many were – Apple reasoned that a smiling CEO interacting with the common folks would serve as a positive counterbalance.

Of course, this assumes that the media would use PR photos with the story.

I chose a cross-section of publications which included several mainstream media properties and examined whether their stories on March 29/30 included Apple’s photos:

  • All Things D
  • Bloomberg
  • Business Insider
  • CBS News Online
  • Engadget
  • Fast Company
  • Forbes
  • GigaOm
  • Gizmodo
  • The Huffington Post (Reuters)
  • The Los Angeles Times
  • Mashable
  • Reuters
  • TechCrunch
  • The New York Times
  • The Next Web
  • The Telegraph
  • The Wall Street Journal
  • VentureBeat
  • Yahoo! News

The number surprised me.

Sixteen out of the 20 properties incorporated Apple’s storytelling candy.

Only Fast Company, TechCrunch, CBS News Online and All Things D took a pass.

I thought CBS News Online was particularly enterprising, pulling a candid shot from Weibo (Chinese micro-blogging service) of a Chinese consumer hanging with Mr. Cook.

 

 

Apple figured out whether they communicated or not, journalists would write the Cook-in-China story and these stories would need visuals. And if they prevented the media from taking their own shots, they would probably use the Apple-controlled photos.

The data suggests they were right.

It’s also fascinating to see how the credit for the photos played out.

The wire services, Bloomberg, Reuters and AFP, identify the photos as coming from Apple.

But as media properties published their own stories and needed visuals, they pulled photos from the wire services, often dropping Apple as being the source. You can see an example of this in The L.A. Times story, which was kind enough to even include the Apple-crafted caption with the words “newly built Foxconn manufacturing facility.”

 

 

Like a poker player with most of the chips exerting his will on the table, Apple leverages its position of strength with the media.

While journalists don’t want to be “handled,” it appears they make an exception for Apple.

The legacy of Steve Jobs lives on in more ways than one.

Note: One of our account folks, Julie Sugishita, did much of the heavy lifting for this post. If anyone is interested in a look at the data (spreadsheet), post a “send an email to storytelling@hoffman.com” with your request and I’ll send it along.